Original neutral source model for B-first, Jo’s silver page. Complete source: An original fictional book-club note records Jo saying, “The silver page made me laugh.” Jo is speaking about one page in a made-up story. Later the note says curator Mel hopes other readers will smile. No other reader response is reported. Jo’s sentence is a personal response; Mel’s hope is a different voice. Neither is a count of everybody’s response. This is fiction, not a real participant, service, journey, measurement or learner result. No own answer or criterion is supplied by the graphic. Planned original geometry: Use Jo’s exact quotation in one named speech panel and Mel’s hope in a separate named report panel. No extra smiling audience or recorded reactions.
Actual original drawing
The geometry implements the accepted source, without an own answer, grade, trial or endorsement. All four own aids have empty response interiors; labels/access directions stay outside. A described or hand-drawn sheet is a complete alternative.
All visible words in reading order
B-first · original source model
Fictional model · complete source travels below
Jo
“The silver page
made me laugh.”
Mel
hopes other readers
will smile
Complete source
An original fictional book-club note records Jo saying, “The silver page made me
laugh.” Jo is speaking about one page in a made-up story. Later the note says
curator Mel hopes other readers will smile. No other reader response is reported.
Jo’s sentence is a personal response; Mel’s hope is a different voice. Neither is a
count of everybody’s response.