# V11 · complete visual alternative

Original neutral source model for B-first, Jo’s silver page. Complete source: An original fictional book-club note records Jo saying, “The silver page made me laugh.” Jo is speaking about one page in a made-up story. Later the note says curator Mel hopes other readers will smile. No other reader response is reported. Jo’s sentence is a personal response; Mel’s hope is a different voice. Neither is a count of everybody’s response. This is fiction, not a real participant, service, journey, measurement or learner result. No own answer or criterion is supplied by the graphic. Planned original geometry: Use Jo’s exact quotation in one named speech panel and Mel’s hope in a separate named report panel. No extra smiling audience or recorded reactions.

## Actual original drawing

![Original source drawing](V11.svg)

The geometry implements the accepted source, without an own answer, grade, trial or endorsement. All four own aids have empty response interiors; labels/access directions stay outside. A described or hand-drawn sheet is a complete alternative.

## All visible words in reading order

B-first · original source model

Fictional model · complete source travels below

Jo

“The silver page

made me laugh.”

Mel

hopes other readers

will smile

Complete source

An original fictional book-club note records Jo saying, “The silver page made me

laugh.” Jo is speaking about one page in a made-up story. Later the note says

curator Mel hopes other readers will smile. No other reader response is reported.

Jo’s sentence is a personal response; Mel’s hope is a different voice. Neither is a

count of everybody’s response.