V11 · complete visual alternativeYear 4 English · T1 W9–10 · Aids / V11 alternative

Source review complete · local suitability still needs review.

Original neutral source model for B-first, Jo’s silver page. Complete source: An original fictional book-club note records Jo saying, “The silver page made me laugh.” Jo is speaking about one page in a made-up story. Later the note says curator Mel hopes other readers will smile. No other reader response is reported. Jo’s sentence is a personal response; Mel’s hope is a different voice. Neither is a count of everybody’s response. This is fiction, not a real participant, service, journey, measurement or learner result. No own answer or criterion is supplied by the graphic. Planned original geometry: Use Jo’s exact quotation in one named speech panel and Mel’s hope in a separate named report panel. No extra smiling audience or recorded reactions.

Actual original drawing

The geometry implements the accepted source, without an own answer, grade, trial or endorsement. All four own aids have empty response interiors; labels/access directions stay outside. A described or hand-drawn sheet is a complete alternative.

All visible words in reading order

B-first · original source model

Fictional model · complete source travels below

Jo

“The silver page

made me laugh.”

Mel

hopes other readers

will smile

Complete source

An original fictional book-club note records Jo saying, “The silver page made me

laugh.” Jo is speaking about one page in a made-up story. Later the note says

curator Mel hopes other readers will smile. No other reader response is reported.

Jo’s sentence is a personal response; Mel’s hope is a different voice. Neither is a

count of everybody’s response.