Small job
Create a repair handover envelope containing the response and a clear message, so another person can understand the pretend costume job without asking for the story again.
Make and try
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Read or hear both complete matched sources. Choose one of their readers, character views or practical jobs.
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Create a repair handover envelope containing the response and a clear message, so another person can understand the pretend costume job without asking for the story again.
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Make a small first version using the day's child direction: ‘Read the answer. Tell it clearly. Put your new idea in a different sentence.’
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Try it with a willing reader, or use the supplied reader question/answer. Record which was used. Nobody has to interview or perform publicly.
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Choose one useful change or explain one part you keep. Put the source note and any adult help beside the work.
Another option
Use the other complete matched source for a second version after introducing it; compare reader fit rather than page count.
Time
20–40 minutes across sittings, unpiloted; ordinary teaching and feedback, not a scored assignment.
What this can show
Look for an accurate choice and supplied reason, and a signalled new suggestion. Do not require the adult’s model wording or invent a factual property for the item.