Day 40 · My own words
Static paper mode. These four optional spaces start empty. Use one, several or free paper.
Source C19
Complete original feedback story: A writer’s first guide says “Look on the page with the kit.” A fictional reader says “I’m not sure which page you mean.” The writer drafts “Open Kit parts on page1.” No second reader response is supplied.
Source C20
Complete original folio pair. First words: “The card has a thing in the middle.” Chosen revision: “The round badge has a square hole in the middle.” Source: the C01 invented badge record. Writer note: “I chose these words to help someone find that drawing.” No independent reader test is recorded.