C19 · Complete teaching source

Complete original feedback story: A writer’s first guide says “Look on the page with the kit.” A fictional reader says “I’m not sure which page you mean.” The writer drafts “Open Kit parts on page1.” No second reader response is supplied.

Child invitation

Explain one change and one thing you would still want to check.

Staff possible reasoning

The revision names a heading and page; whether this reader now finds it still requires a new response.

Next teaching

Create a different explicit pointer for the Questions page in C12 and invite actual optional feedback separately.

Limit

The first comment is not a classroom trial or proof the revision worked.