A Guide for the Next PlayerYear 2 English · T2 W11–12 · Rich / O08 · Text version

Pretend rules: lay three picture cards face up, point to one, then let a willing next player point to a different card. A player may stop after one turn.

First draft: Put them out. Do it.

Selected revision: Put three picture cards face up. Point to one card. Let the next player point to a different card, if they want a turn. You can stop after one turn.

Author reason: I named the cards and the pointing action because my first words did not say what to do. I also kept the choice to stop.

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