# Ten optional English starts — Days 21–30

Choose one route each time; use these as flexible approximately 35-minute offers, split or extended to fit real reading access. These ten starts are one partial fortnight, not a daily quota or whole Year 6 programme. Preparation: [teacher guide](TEACHER-GUIDE.md); complete [ordinary texts](ORIGINAL-TEXTS.md); [twenty solved examples](WORKED-EXAMPLES.md). The only materials are the text through a chosen accessible mode and any usual way to compose: scrap, pencil, typing, sign/AAC or a literal scribe. No purchase, printer, costume, performance, screen or real personal story is required.

Ordinary start: welcome and choice 3 minutes; enjoy/revisit text 5; model 5; guided try 5; one chosen route 10; review 5; teacher next note 2. Before each read, invite “Read it yourself, hear the exact words, or use your usual text access.” Before the try ask “Which part do you want to explore?” Model only the ordinary example named for that day. Guided try uses a different ordinary phrase before the learner's own route. Close with one exact line/mark, the support given and one next teaching move. Quiet composition is complete participation. Adult physical marks, reading, learner choices, independent spelling, actual rehearsal/delivery and actual willing reader response stay separate.

On Days25 and30 capture the new first response before explanation, examples or later routes. Keep E closed until Day25 and F closed until Day30. Staff keep keys and unused rechecks separately. No family card is required or collected. A stop, unfinished component or inaccessible source means evidence remains open; preserve needed access.


Each route includes one concrete teacher move, what to notice and a next move. Offer one route; do not make learners complete three or teachers maintain 30 logs. Short child invitations sit beside teacher precision in the final pack. On Days 25/30, all routes are **after** clean first capture. Family/recheck sources are never a prerequisite.

### Day 21 — Enter a story; find what changes

**Learner:** “What changes for Mira? Show me the moment you noticed.” Read A once for enjoyment before annotating. Let learners choose the moment that matters to them. Model literal action at A1 and inference at A2 using one exact phrase; do not assign a moral. Guide a beginning/turn/ending retelling with the story open. Exit: an actual change plus one source detail. If story access is not ready, supply the full literal reading and revisit later.

- **21A — Event strip:** Choose three A moments and make three short captions or spoken/AAC entries in their order. Teacher asks “What happened between these two?” Notice cause versus a list of objects; if a causal link is missing, reread the intervening paragraph and compose one connection. Adult can move cards according to child decisions; adult sequencing is not child sequencing.
- **21B — Character window:** Select A2, A4 or A6; make a two-part note: what Mira does, what she may think. Teacher asks which words support the second part. Notice a plausible inference versus invented certainty; next teach a separate ordinary actor/narrator example if needed. Choosing not to infer beyond the text is valid.
- **21C — Reader's turning point:** Choose whether A3, A4 or A5 is the strongest turn, or name another. Explain how the ending would differ without it. Teacher keeps the text visible, asks a neutral “Which later part relies on it?” Notice an actual causal argument; next compare two ordinary turns without insisting on a single correct paragraph.

### Day 22 — Two stories, related ideas, different choices

**Learner:** “What belongs together in these stories? What stays different?” Read B for enjoyment; clarify unnamed first-person narrator without supplying gender. Model A's blank square and B's retained cloth as different responses to change. Guide one comparison tied to both sources. Exit: one similarity plus one difference with details, not “they are both stories” alone.

- **22A — Two-place comparison:** Choose a theme such as making room, holding memories or accepting surprise; compare A and B in two sentences/cards. Teacher asks for one detail from each, notices whether idea is developed rather than simply named; next model an ordinary topic-versus-theme pair if needed. Alternative supported themes are welcome.
- **22B — Knowledge swap:** Retell B2 through Nell in an explicitly new adaptation of two or three sentences. Teacher asks what Nell can see and what original B does not reveal. Notice own viewpoint choice and honest distinction between supplied story and invention; next remove an unearned narrator claim or label it as newly invented fiction. No demand to sound like another human author.
- **22C — Ending contrast:** Keep A6 and B5 side by side; select one verb or final detail from each and explain a possible effect. Teacher asks “How do the endings leave different things open?” Notice A's unimagined place versus B's unknown recognition; next revisit exact ending words if learner invents guaranteed feelings or audience reaction.

### Day 23 — Poetry: an image can carry an idea

**Learner:** “Which line would you keep? What does it help you imagine?” Encounter C and D through print, literal read-aloud or accessible text. Model C4 as nonliteral human quality, then examine repeated words and line-end echoes. Hearing, speaking and rhythm performance remain optional; visual sound-pattern identification is named as visual. Guide a comparison of what C7/C8 and D7/D8 do. Exit: one exact feature and a possible meaning/effect.

- **23A — Image-to-meaning:** Choose C3, C4, C7 or D7; write/say what is literally present and what the image suggests. Teacher contrasts an ordinary object action with the figurative phrase. Notice personification/metaphor tied to meaning; next use W05 (below), without requiring technical labels or an imagined mental picture.
- **23B — Pattern and pause:** Mark repeated openings and/or matching line endings on the complete text. Choose where to pause in a reading or silent marked script; explain the choice. Teacher asks how repetition links ideas. Notice actual pattern and purpose; next compare the repeated “Here is” with a version using different openings. A silent plan is not a performed sound response.
- **23C — Own two-line reply:** Choose an ordinary object from the fictional city/nook or an invented object; give it one human action across two lines. Teacher asks why that action suits the chosen meaning. Notice child-created image rather than copied C; next change an unrelated human action into a more purposeful one. A literal alternative is valid but recorded as literal language, with another figurative invitation later.

### Day 24 — A scene leaves work for its reader

**Learner:** “What do Kit and Sal want? Where would you put the pause?” Read S with role labels and bracketed stage directions intact. Teacher models S7 as Kit's concern, not proof the future audience will think they forgot; S14 leaves actual trials unshown. Compare story narration with dialogue/cues and poem line arrangement; discuss purpose and adaptable stages without imposing a universal orientation–complication formula. Exit: one structural difference and why it serves a purpose.

- **24A — Director's choice:** Choose S8 or S11 and write a different harmless stage direction that changes tension. Teacher asks what a reader could infer from the new action. Notice actual authored direction with purpose; next compare two original actions. No acting or moving a real object required, and no predicted response credited as observation.
- **24B — Scene to story:** Turn S8–12 into a short narrator paragraph, choosing Kit's or Sal's limited viewpoint. Teacher asks which script facts remain and what internal thought is newly invented. Notice viewpoint consistency; next remove a slip into the other role's private knowledge or intentionally label a broader narrator. This is a literary adaptation, not a factual report.
- **24C — Two possible endings:** Make one ending where they choose a pause and one where they keep the earlier sequence; choose which serves gentle suspense, humour or another purpose. Teacher asks how the dialogue/cue changes serve the selected purpose. Notice consequence and reason; next change a cue rather than adding a mandatory lesson/moral. S itself does not supply either tested outcome.

### Day 25 — New literary comparison, before teaching feedback

**Learner:** “Read two new stories. Tell me what you noticed in each.” Present fresh E exactly as designed in the clean [Fresh E](assessment/FRESH-E.md) learner sheet and separate [staff key](teacher/KEY-AND-NEXT.md), clean learner sources first. Start 3 / access 2, first response about 12 (or split/later), capture 2, choose next teaching 8, optional later route 8. Do not open worked E answers, today's routes or comparative models before capture. Teacher uses separate components and one same-day move. These times are flexible, not a literacy speed test.

- **25A — Later comparison repair:** Use ordinary A/B and select a different theme from the first attempt. Teacher asks for one similarity/difference grounded in both; notice whether the taught comparison move transfers to practice. Next offer R1 at a later sitting only if unused. This later response is not relabelled the first E result.
- **25B — Later viewpoint pocket:** Use W03 or W04; separate what narrator reports, what a role knows, and what is open. Teacher asks for an exact source word before inference. Notice evidence/motive distinction; next use R2 after a suitable interval, without teaching its answer.
- **25C — Later feature bridge:** Use W06's tiny original comparison; choose one phrase and explain possible effect. Teacher accepts a different effect with support. Notice link rather than a technique label; next model on another ordinary phrase then use R3 later if needed. No repeated fresh source disguised as new.

### Day 26 — Borrow a seed; make it yours

**Learner:** “Choose what to borrow and what to change. Who is your new piece for?” Revisit A/B/C/D/S. Learner chooses a useful literary purpose: entertain a private reader, offer wonder, make gentle humour, explore uncertainty or create for own enjoyment. Teacher models W11's borrowing/meaningful transformation and clearly labels it as a new text. Guide source-element/new-element planning. Begin an actual first line/scene unit now; a finished planner alone is not composition. Exit: identifiable borrowing, own change, purpose and an actual new component.

- **26A — Story transformation:** Choose a setting, character choice or idea from A/B; change one and follow a consequence in two or more own sentences. Teacher asks “What does your change make possible?” Notice causal invention rather than renamed tokens; next develop a consequence if only names changed.
- **26B — Poem transformation:** Choose an image/repeated structure from C/D and build an own short poem for selected meaning. Teacher asks why a new image belongs with that meaning. Notice deliberate experiment and adaptation credit; next compare an image that fits versus random decoration. No required rhyme, syllable count or hearing.
- **26C — Script transformation:** Borrow S's disagreement about timing; create two different harmless fictional goals and at least one own line per role plus a cue. Teacher asks what each role wants now. Notice dialogue doing dramatic work; next give roles distinguishable goals if both only explain the task. A script is not a performance.

### Day 27 — Shape the reader's journey

**Learner:** “What should your reader learn now? What could wait?” Keep learner's actual first version. Model an opening that reveals a choice, a cause/consequence middle and an ending that resolves or deliberately leaves something open. Compare W13's delayed information with W14's script cue, not a compulsory three-part template. Teach a relative embedded clause in an ordinary example: “The traveller who had missed the bridge waited.” It expands who the traveller is; it does not make a second main clause. Exit: a chosen structural change and why it serves the reader.

- **27A — Narrative arrangement:** Move actual draft paragraphs/cards (or child directs a scribe) to try revealing a fact earlier/later. Teacher asks which later detail now changes meaning. Notice purposeful order and retained causal clarity; next restore a necessary cause if suspense becomes incomprehensible. Adult physical placement is separate from learner's order decision.
- **27B — Poem arrangement:** Try two orders of the learner's own lines or stanza break and keep one. Teacher asks what repetition/contrast now links. Notice actual trial and reasoning; next add a clear recurring image if order is arbitrary. No automatic poetry achievement from moving supplied lines alone.
- **27C — Scene arrangement:** Trial an entrance/cue earlier or later in learner's script; clarify one role using an embedded phrase in narration or a direction if useful. Teacher asks what a reader knows when the cue arrives. Notice script structure and actual expansion; next use a smaller original clause example if clause punctuation obscures the idea.

### Day 28 — Language choices change the experience

**Learner:** “Try two words. Keep the one that fits your purpose.” Teacher models W15/W16 and changing tense/adverb groups deliberately; revisit C's recurrence and D's associations (river/sky/harbour). Teach an ordinary dialogue comma: “Wait,” Kit said. Contrast a fronted clause: “Although the room was ready, Kit waited.” Do not treat every short poem fragment as a broken sentence or force dialogue into all genres. Guide one meaningful revision; spelling/grammar support is recorded separately from interpretation. Exit: first/revised words plus a reason.

- **28A — Verb lens:** In own text choose a general verb and compare a sharper verb/adverb group that changes how an action unfolds. Teacher asks what readers could now infer. Notice precise semantic choice, not just “longer is better”; next return to two distinct actions if synonyms change no meaning.
- **28B — Cohesion thread:** Choose a repeated word/associated word set in own piece; repeat deliberately or replace one occurrence to make contrast. Teacher asks how reader can track the idea. Notice connection and intention; next link one later image to an earlier one. No requirement to repeat every noun.
- **28C — Sentence/dialogue repair:** Select an actual sentence or scene line whose boundary is unclear; explain and edit punctuation while preserving intended meaning. Teacher offers the chosen ordinary comma example but does not rewrite content. Notice child explanation plus actual edit; next teach one boundary only, keeping spelling/content evidence separate.

### Day 29 — Read like a reader; make a purposeful final version

**Learner:** “What should stay? What would make your piece clearer or more interesting?” Learner chooses private rereading, a willing partner exchange or optional spoken/signed rehearsal. Give a neutral reader prompt: “Which part led you to that interpretation?” Feedback is optional; without a real reader, use own stated-purpose reread. Teacher models W17/W18 actual edit/credit. Learner makes a final accessible copy or identifies a section ready for sharing. Exit: one retained choice, one edit and source adaptation credit. Draft, final copy, actual sharing and actually delivered presentation have distinct records.

- **29A — Private editorial pass:** Read/listen to own draft; select one gap/confusing connection and revise. Teacher asks where the intended reader needs help. Notice a meaningful first/revised comparison; next try a separate ordinary sentence if learner cannot identify a revision purpose. Adult fluent rereading does not establish independent reading.
- **29B — Willing reader exchange:** Ask a chosen willing person one neutral question about an actual piece; take or reject a suggestion with reason. Teacher records actual response only if it occurred, notices learner agency; next use own reread if no willing reader. No recording, public display or social performance quota.
- **29C — Presentation choice:** Prepare and optionally actually rehearse/deliver an excerpt in comfortable spoken/signed/multimodal form, choosing pace/pause/visual cue for a purpose. Teacher distinguishes planned features from actual use. Notice actual creation/rehearsal/delivery separately; next improve one cue after own evaluation or real willing response. Written completion remains complete participation at narrower presentation scope.

### Day 30 — A new seed, an own change and an edit

**Learner:** “Make a new piece from this seed. Keep your first version and show one change.” Present fresh F poem and neutral prompts before ordinary examples or routes. Offer two sittings if useful; no word/genre/completion quota for first capture. Teacher records purpose/source borrowing/actual creation/language/edit separately. Afterwards choose one teaching move from separate F rubric. Do not provide F model text or force a supplied plot before first response.

- **30A — Later new story move:** Revisit an ordinary own draft or W19; change a cause and follow its consequence in an actual paragraph. Teacher asks what now needs to change later. Notice meaningful adaptation; next offer unused R4 later after teaching. Keep later achievement separate from F first response.
- **30B — Later new poem move:** Use own earlier poem or W20; try a contrasting final image. Teacher asks why it suits selected meaning. Notice actual new line and a reason; next compare two ordinary endings before R3/R4 later if needed. No forced rhyme or adult supplied “beautiful” ending.
- **30C — Later new scene move:** Use ordinary S or an earlier own scene; change one role's goal, write a new line/cue and edit it. Teacher asks which role now creates tension. Notice actual creation and visible purposeful revision; next use a smaller scene if roles merely repeat each other. No performance or audience response inferred.

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