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Staff guide · The creek-model visitorYear 4 Science · T1 W7–8 · Staff · Staff / D first

Use only after the own attempt. These local criteria are examples of evidence, not an official grade or a unique required phrasing.

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Made-up story. A visitor to a pretend creek exhibition asks, “How could water from the sea reach land as rain?” A model card lists: sea liquid → evaporation → invisible water vapour in air → condensation → cloud droplets → precipitation → land water. A second branch shows cloud precipitation to sea instead. The model has no amounts or travel times and is not a weather forecast. The visitor wants a short useful explanation, not a prediction about tomorrow. You may use a drawing, labels, speech, signing, dictation or typed words.

Q1

Prompt: Make a short answer for this visitor using the three process names.

Minimum meaningful evidence: Accurately explains evaporation/condensation/precipitation in the stated sea-to-land relationship.

Worked example: Sea liquid can evaporate to vapour; condensation forms cloud droplets; precipitation can bring water to land.

Next teaching: Reteach the particular missing link with new cards before later D.

Partial national link: AC9S4U02

Actual response / support / next appointment: ______

Q2

Prompt: What does the second branch change?

Minimum meaningful evidence: Identifies precipitation destination sea instead of land, without assuming all water must take one path.

Worked example: It shows precipitation to sea rather than land; both are possible model paths.

Next teaching: Use an unassessed two-destination cloud model.

Partial national link: AC9S4I04

Actual response / support / next appointment: ______

Q3

Prompt: Who is your explanation for, and what question does it help answer?

Minimum meaningful evidence: Identifies the visitor and their sea-to-land rain question as the useful need.

Worked example: It helps the visitor understand how sea water can reach land as rain.

Next teaching: Choose a different visitor/question and match a relevant explanatory purpose.

Partial national link: AC9S4H02

Actual response / support / next appointment: ______

Q4

Prompt: Give one useful limit for the visitor.

Minimum meaningful evidence: Communicates no forecast/amount/time limit relevant to that audience.

Worked example: This model does not tell you whether or when it will rain tomorrow.

Next teaching: Practise a short audience-specific limit on a different model.

Partial national link: AC9S4I06

Actual response / support / next appointment: ______

Use after Day 39. Preserve the earlier response and what was subsequently taught. New complete stories have familiar taught process/representation components; do not claim all-unseen answers, matched statistical difficulty or automatic improvement. Fiction/source reasoning does not establish actual measurement or conduct.

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