# A revised proposal, still untried · D-later

## Full selected source

Original invented D2 revision: paper treasure-game proposal now uses a marked side area rather than the whole open area, and places no clue beside the seat. Noor’s new note: “I still need to know when the open area is available for a ball game.” Bay’s new note: “There would be no clue beside the seat in this plan.” No actual try, safe separation, space dimensions, approval or real feedback supplied. New notes describe the proposed arrangement, not demonstrated benefits.

## Exact four prompts

1. What two features of the proposal were revised?
2. Which note concerns an unresolved time question, and what does the other note describe?
3. Does D2 establish a safe, approved and successful real arrangement? Explain a limit.
4. Suggest a considered next response with source support, a possible effect and an unknown.

Usual communication, neutral source reading and confirmed scribing are available. Leave any part unanswered. Capture own work and actual help before feedback; known source exposure stays recorded. This is original fiction, not a secure test or QCAA grade.