Repair the Fern Hall display
Made-up hall history display says “New steps added in 2026. Everyone loved them.” Record F, written in 2026, says a handrail was added beside the existing steps in 2020 after committee members asked for a rail. The record gives no visitor feedback and no current safety inspection. Fictional reader Dev wants to know what was actually added; reader Miri wants to know where the date came from. Proposed action A is to replace the caption with a dated source-based handrail sentence. Proposed action B is to leave the caption and add decorative flowers. Neither proposal has been tried with readers.
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Your questions
- Which parts of the display sentence need changing? Use record F.
- Choose a useful change for Dev or Miri. Explain how it fits what they want.
- How might your change help? What might make it harder? Has anyone tried it here?
- Make one new caption and one checking question for a willing reader or for your own source check.
Grown-up help
Use only after the actual components have been taught. After date/source/change/limits and Day 19 possible-action teaching. Corrected caption is assessment response, not ordinary preset or preprinted learner model.
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