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Repair the Fern Hall display — complete text alternativeYear 3 HASS · T1 W3–4 · Aids / D first source alternative

Whole source-defined relationships, names and date jobs. No staff worked answer or prefilled learner response is printed. Made-up hall history display says “New steps added in 2026. Everyone loved them.” Record F, written in 2026, says a handrail was added beside the existing steps in 2020 after committee members asked for a rail. The record gives no visitor feedback and no current safety inspection. Fictional reader Dev wants to know what was actually added; reader Miri wants to know where the date came from. Proposed action A is to replace the caption with a dated source-based handrail sentence. Proposed action B is to leave the caption and add decorative flowers. Neither proposal has been tried with readers. Reading order is top to bottom. No meaning relies on colour. This is original broad line art of supplied fictional records, not a photograph, measured plan or current site.

INVENTED DISPLAY CLAIM

“New steps added in 2026. Everyone loved them.”

SOURCE F /written 2026

Reports a handrail added beside existing steps in 2020 after committee members asked for it. No visitor feedback/current safety inspection.

Reader needs

Dev wants to know what was added. Miri wants the date’s source.

Untried proposals

A: replace with a dated source-based handrail sentence. B: leave the claim and add decorative flowers. Neither tried with readers.

Complete source

Made-up hall history display says “New steps added in 2026. Everyone loved them.” Record F, written in 2026, says a handrail was added beside the existing steps in 2020 after committee members asked for a rail. The record gives no visitor feedback and no current safety inspection. Fictional reader Dev wants to know what was actually added; reader Miri wants to know where the date came from. Proposed action A is to replace the caption with a dated source-based handrail sentence. Proposed action B is to leave the caption and add decorative flowers. Neither proposal has been tried with readers.

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