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The shared player-box message · staffYear 3 English · T1 W9–10 · Teacher · Teacher / Cases / D later

• Complete matching neutral source
• Child · four blank own fields
• Matching four-question case paper
• V20 · source scene and four blank areas · Complete terms
• V20 · complete text alternative
• Ordinary eight-field Reporter Desk paper
• N29 · full follow-on lesson for Q1
• N30 · full follow-on lesson for Q2
• N31 · full follow-on lesson for Q3
• N32 · full follow-on lesson for Q4

The shared player-box message · staff case

Eligibility and exposure

Show the complete matched source only when beginning this case. If the child has already seen its staff worked answers, practised it, or received answer-level help, record that exposure and use it as supported/formative teaching rather than an independent first response. Later is a new source, not an automatic progress test.

Help and actual evidence

Adult reading of the full source, usual communication, larger print, breaks, pointing and exact dictation are allowed; record which. Do not supply a component’s worked answer or criterion before a genuine first response. Reading aloud means this case cannot by itself demonstrate independent decoding; adult pen work cannot demonstrate handwriting.

Complete neutral source

This complete new fictional editing source gives its intended meanings. Three players share one paper-card box. Its draft label reads ‘the players box’. The intended meaning is a box belonging to those several players. A second draft says ‘We do not want the cards mixed’; the writer wants the shorter contraction of ‘do not’. Another draft says ‘Come here to hear the tune’: here gives a place and hear concerns listening in usual Australian English. A final present-tense note says ‘The players likes the quiet star wave’; its subject is those several players. No recording, hearing test, real event or personal information is required. Teachers may supply unfamiliar print words, with that help recorded. The source concerns regular plural possession and the stated present meanings, not every irregular plural spelling pattern.

D-later-Q1

Invitation

Edit the box label for the stated several-player ownership and explain the apostrophe’s position.

Component criterion

Uses ‘the players’ box’ and connects the after-s mark to the regular plural owners.

Staff example after an attempt

The players’ box belongs to several players. A player’s box would state one player instead.

Judgement limit

Use this component-specific description with the actual response and recorded help. No point total, A–E level, diagnosis, causal gain or independent-exposure claim.

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N29 · AC9E3LA11

D-later-Q2

Invitation

Shorten ‘do not’ in the supplied sentence and explain the apostrophe’s job.

Component criterion

Uses ‘don’t’ and identifies missing letters while preserving the intended meaning.

Staff example after an attempt

‘We don’t want the cards mixed.’ The contraction keeps ‘do not’; its apostrophe is not an ownership mark.

Judgement limit

Use this component-specific description with the actual response and recorded help. No point total, A–E level, diagnosis, causal gain or independent-exposure claim.

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N30 · AC9E3LA11

D-later-Q3

Invitation

Explain the different meanings of here and hear in the supplied sentence.

Component criterion

Gives place for here and listening for hear; pronunciation/language variety may be supported without claiming independent spelling.

Staff example after an attempt

Here points to a place; hear means listen. Their supplied sentence meanings distinguish the spellings.

Judgement limit

Use this component-specific description with the actual response and recorded help. No point total, A–E level, diagnosis, causal gain or independent-exposure claim.

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N31 · AC9E3LY12, AC9E3LY05

D-later-Q4

Invitation

Edit ‘The players likes the quiet star wave’ for the stated several players’ present preference.

Component criterion

Changes to ‘The players like the quiet star wave’ with subject-verb agreement and the same present meaning.

Staff example after an attempt

Several players take ‘like’ here. The edit does not change their present preference into a past event.

Judgement limit

Use this component-specific description with the actual response and recorded help. No point total, A–E level, diagnosis, causal gain or independent-exposure claim.

Next teaching

N32 · AC9E3LA06, AC9E3LA08