# C19 · Complete teaching source

Complete original feedback story: A writer’s first guide says “Look on the page with the kit.” A fictional reader says “I’m not sure which page you mean.” The writer drafts “Open Kit parts on page1.” No second reader response is supplied.

## Child invitation

Explain one change and one thing you would still want to check.

## Staff possible reasoning

The revision names a heading and page; whether this reader now finds it still requires a new response.

## Next teaching

Create a different explicit pointer for the Questions page in C12 and invite actual optional feedback separately.

## Limit

The first comment is not a classroom trial or proof the revision worked.