# Staff — A Guide for the Star Card

Capture first, before consulting possible staff models. Record the component, actual help/mode, source/key exposure and exact child choices. Models are possible accounts, not compulsory words.

## Complete neutral source

These are complete facts for a pretend card-finding job. A paper box has a lid. The Star card is inside under the Sun card. A new player wants Star. Open the lid before lifting Sun. Lift Sun to reach Star. A title may be chosen before or after drafting. Separate sentence ideas are: The box is open. The Star card is inside. An unclear draft says: The Sun card is above the Star card. Lift it. The author's stated intended move is to lift the Sun card. No one is recorded using a finished guide.

## Full neutral source picture description

An open-lid box contains overlapping cards, Sun above Star. Exact names/relationships also appear in text. No finished guide, pronoun repair, joined-sentence answer or edit reason appears.

## D-first-1

**Prompt:** Make a short guide for the new player to find Star.

**Criterion:** Own guide conveys finding job and open-lid before lift-Sun to reach Star with purposeful organisation. No fixed length/performance/independent spelling or handwriting from scribing.

**Possible staff account:** Find the Star Card. Open the lid. Lift the Sun card. The Star card is under it.

**Different next offer:** N25

## D-first-2

**Prompt:** Clarify Lift it without changing the author's intended move.

**Criterion:** Unambiguously identifies Sun as moved object while keeping the supplied relation/action; no decorative adjective demand.

**Possible staff account:** Lift the Sun card.

**Different next offer:** N26

## D-first-3

**Prompt:** Join the two supplied sentence ideas in one complete compound sentence.

**Criterion:** Both independent ideas remain, with a fitting coordinating conjunction and sentence-boundary punctuation. A fragment/comma splice is not this component. Record scribed punctuation choices/help.

**Possible staff account:** The box is open, and the Star card is inside.

**Different next offer:** N27

## D-first-4

**Prompt:** Choose one own edit and explain its reader job, or explain keeping a clear part.

**Criterion:** Specific own before/after and meaning/reader reason, or grounded keep decision. No forced flaw/reader trial; adult wording named.

**Possible staff account:** I would put Find the Star Card at the top so the player can see the job.

**Different next offer:** N28